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Still thinking of name but want to see what you think

Postby thejthar » June 21st, 2008, 11:34 pm

I came up with a story that might be fun to RP but I want to see what y'all think.

Way back in the past when man just appeared on Earth there were four elemental masters. Fire, wind, earth, and water. They allowed man to live on Earth for the time being so they could study them. But, one day the Fire Master helped man by giving them fire. The Elemental Masters were angry with the Fire Master cause he helped man evolve faster. They banished the Fire Master to the center of the Earth so he couldn't interfere any more. Next the other Elemental Masters made great disasters to hopefully destroy man but some how man manged to survive. They wanted to destroy man because they were afraid that man would destroy Earth. Finally they decided to destroy man personally but when they each saw a women, they fell in love with the beauty of women. They married and had a family but their children didn't have powers. Later a great war between man started and killed the elemental masters but their children survived the war and were separated.

As the Fire Master stayed in the center of the earth he started to find ways out. He learned that the other masters were already dead and decided that he was going to destroy man. He was angry that man killed the other masters before he could get his revenge on them. But he could only erupt fire in certain places. As his anger increases he will one day escape the center of the earth and destroy man.

It is now about the year 2020 and another war between man has started. And the descendants of the other masters started to gain powers. But only one of each descendant gained the powers. Not knowing that they are about to save Earth from the Fire Master but they are going to be in the war to.
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Postby UraRenge » June 23rd, 2008, 4:20 pm

your story has one major flaw in it: why would the fire master be angry? it would be logical for him to be happy since the elemental masters died at the hands of the things they banished him for helping.and all due to their weakness. if i were the fire master i would be extremely happy.
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Postby thejthar » June 24th, 2008, 12:20 pm

Eh, I guess. I can see that. Oh well it was a good thought at the moment.
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Postby DanteSilver » June 24th, 2008, 1:43 pm

Mebbe, do something like, the Elemental Masters have the seals to open his prison, and Man knows that the Fire Master wants to enslave the world?

Which starts the war?
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Postby thejthar » June 25th, 2008, 11:48 am

DanteSilver wrote:Mebbe, do something like, the Elemental Masters have the seals to open his prison, and Man knows that the Fire Master wants to enslave the world?

Which starts the war?


That gives me an idea. Give me a day or two and I might come up with something new.
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Postby DanteSilver » June 26th, 2008, 1:19 pm

Alright awesome.
Well you have a member ready and waiting for new updates right her!
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Postby thejthar » July 7th, 2008, 11:40 am

I've been thinking I'm going to dump this stroy cause I thought of a little better story. I should have it up tonight.
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Postby DanteSilver » July 7th, 2008, 2:00 pm

Sure.
Sounds ace.
Plan it and stuff?
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Postby thejthar » July 7th, 2008, 8:12 pm

You know what screw it. I can't think of anything good. I like to try to make stories that have crazy plot twists but what I make are very obvious.
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Postby DanteSilver » July 8th, 2008, 6:23 am

Obvious is fine.
Don't worry.
Or maybe forget about the twist, and just make a story.
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Postby thejthar » July 10th, 2008, 11:42 pm

Alright here we go with a new story.

I call it Shades

Its modern time but the world is in chaos. The stock market crashes again for some unknown reason. The world is in panic and people are doing what ever to stay alive. Some people actually try getting jobs but everyone else is taking a different route to stay alive. Crime has increased through the roof and police are having trouble keeping the peace. The source of the increase crime is because of my man named Shades, master of the worlds newest and biggest crime syndicate ever. Or should I say it is the only crime syndicate in the world called The Shadow. No one knows who Shades is except that he is always wearing a pair of very dark sun glasses that are so dark you can't see his glaring eyes that can break any man. They also say if you join his syndicate you will be never be poor and the law can't do anything about it.

It seemed hopeless that the police would able to stop him until they learned from an unknown source that a recruiter for The Shadow will be in town recruiting anyone that can complete a certain job. The police decide to send in an under cover agent to join The Shadow that can hopefully get close to Shades to stop him.
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Postby DanteSilver » July 11th, 2008, 7:37 am

Oh that sounds cool.
Are you gonna be Shades, or is he gonna be someone you refer to but not control?
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Postby thejthar » July 11th, 2008, 7:19 pm

Yeah I'm going to control him when we meet him but I'm going play as another person. And the other characters I was going to let anyone take the agent and everyone else is going to be other people getting recruited who become friends with the agent.
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Postby DanteSilver » July 13th, 2008, 11:57 am

Well first here, and so I reckon I will take the agent :)
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Postby thejthar » July 14th, 2008, 11:42 am

I'm probably going to make this into a new topic later to see how many more people will join.
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