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Chapter 4: The Fight of the Ages, a Hero's exile nears...

Postby Zeth » December 6th, 2007, 2:39 pm

...For long moments the Colosseum was deathly silent, the spectator's fearing to breathe knowing that it may break the tension surrounding the arena. Two Gladiator's fighting for their enjoyment, knowing that defeat means death. Zynade took a few moment's sizing up her new foe, for her this was the last step in order to gain her freedom. There was not much to him a regular who used a short sword and shield, his raiment of glory was most likely heavily armored as fashion for men of his build and physique. she knew from the times she had seen him fight that he not only wielded a sword expertly but was a master of shield-bashing techniques. No, this would not be an easy match, but trusting in her pole-blade known throughout the kingdom as Hreasvalgr, she could probably win.

The Gong rang, the fight has started, each of the combatants circling each other. Both were watching each other waiting for a chance for the other to make a mistake. Perhaps slipping in the blood-strewn sand that covered the floor, or the gory remnants of previous fights that have been held earlier to appease the crowd. Both were experienced as the saying goes, "light-footed" enough to know that they would not easily make such a novice mistake as slipping.
Zynade knew that her opponent was way to cautious, in an effort to confuse him she started circling the other way, but slipped on some intestines, her opponent seeing her drop her gaurd in effort to get up rushed in for the quick-kill. Too late it was feint maneuver to draw him in. seeing the pole blade come in at his legs. Jumping sideways and throwing his shield at the pole blade to stop the momentum. This tactic partially worked in the effort that her strike was not a killing blow but it did make contact with his left leg severing several tendons, making it hard for him to move around. Zynade grumbled but seeing her opponent on the floor without a shield, went towards her foe ready to slice off his head. nearing the downed man and raising her weapon for the downwards stroke, Zynade had a fistful of sand thrown into her face.
Temporarily blinded Zynade stepped back wildly flailing her weapon in an attempt to keep her opponent from advancing, with one hand wielding her two-handed weapon and the other hurriedly wiping grit out of her eyes. seeing Zynade with her guard once again lowered, the man made a leaping motion towards her on his good leg. Too late again did he notice that she had regained her posture, too late he noticed that he was shieldless. too late he clumsily tried to gaurd the butt of her weapon as it made contact with his hand and jarred the weapon out of it. Too late he saw as she reversed her blow bringing the blade end down that split him in two. Too late was the time when the crowd erupted in a fight fit for a king.

It was watching the match with intrigue that Wolf noticed a shadow on the parapet out of the corner of his eye. Looking with interest he noticed many things at once. the first was it wasn't a shadow but an archer with a notched arrow aiming down into the arena. the second was his target was Zynade. the third was seeing the king give a signal as if to shoot. With not a whole lot of time, Wolf quickly unsheathed his sword and in one motion threw it expertly down into the arena. Just as the archer shot his arrow the blade reached its target first burying into the ground deflecting the arrow from hitting its target.
Jumping down Wolf raced towards the arena on his way hitting the archer off the parapet and falling to his death. Hitting ground Wolf raced to his sword and putting his body between the lady and the king. "My Lady," Wolf answered gruffly, "You're in danger allow me to escort you out of here..."

Not ten seconds have past and the king's men arrived in the arena ready to rush and slaughter the two....
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Postby Zeth » December 13th, 2007, 5:22 pm

(refresh) put some comments dam u guys, its hard putting up a story when i have no constructive criticism here...
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Postby KeKe » December 13th, 2007, 8:23 pm

umm it sucks?? sorry i didnt read it and i dont plan on it. i dont like reading :)
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Postby UraRenge » January 25th, 2008, 2:33 pm

no1 posts ne thing becuz no1 reads these stories.
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Postby DanteSilver » May 8th, 2008, 12:04 pm

I like it.
:)
And so we add our own character into the arena, or what?
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